YoungBreeze's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Hot Pair of Nikes!!!]

WOOOOOOOOOO

damn....

[Clockz]

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ya flow is terrible... you sound like you reading off tha paper... man... this was bad.... 1/5

[K-Dm - My Mistakes]

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claps were super weak... bassline and kicks were not hittin... you need to focus more on tha production aspect of ya beat... mixing and things of that nature... you have the composition part down pretty well.... but as far as makin ya beat felt.. you need work... 2/5

K-Dm responds:

hmmm i never really noticed but the claps r pretty weak...
but even so i dun really think it takes that much away from the song

probly couldve used a better bass but some ppl still like this bass lol

and i am trying to get better at mastering...
but the mastering here seems ok to me

neways thurs always room for improvment so ill keep tryin to improve my drums n mastering in the future

K-Dm

[[Fets] Geeks R Us]

not my steeze

i get tha concept of this beat.. so i aint gonna vote low... its a cool track... but just not my steeeze... 2/5

Nofets responds:

You're right. Not your style. MINE.

[Cannibal Brigade - Cannibals]

aiight

first dudes flow is too choppy... sounds like son reading off tha paper... warspawn still a lil reckless on tha mic... good at times... bad in others... really akward....still need some work.. then again... it might actually work for you.... hook aint bad... until you start that almost fast talkin shit... its hard to understand you...

3/5

[Flashing lights instru remake]

try again...

and when u do try harder... its easty to replays melodies.... and arrange a song that has already been put together... so when u do a remake... trry to make is sound as good or better... you put the beat to shame with this one... 2/5

no hate ... just real talk....

[Lejin - (TruthOfSes)]

still??

ya still goin at it??

who did that beat?!...eeekkkkk

you need some heat...

wonder where u can get some??? youngbreeze.com maybe?! lmao....

good shit my n***a...

Lejin responds:

Hahaha yeah its ubelievable how long ago did we close his casket? I still hear him turning in there trying to resurrect LOL!

BTW i see you n***a BaLLLLLiiiiiiiin!!! hahaha that money keeps flowing from them beats you makin XD

You know that little mouse is trying to be like you now trying to sell them playschool beats for rent money? hahaha thats right!! RENT MONEY!!! Fuck the PHONEBILL he having RENT PROBLEMS CAUSE HE STOLE TOO MUCH FROM THE MOMMY PURSE!

(including the make up)

[-(TM)- The B347]

funky

needs more swag tho...

ThrasherMan responds:

What you mean by that?

[World Earth (Demo)]

wow...

suprisngly ur wack... after you came and game me such a weak reviwe i thought u'd be aleast half as good as me.... i was WRONG... pizzle. b4 u give me feedback... make sure you are on my level atleast...

TheFlur responds:

Wow,really got me there with your Caps-Locked " WRONG ".

I told you on wich points I think you should work and you go dissing me with your Dr. Evil knowledge. Do you bitch everytime someone has critics on your tracks? In fact, the only person who agrees with you and gave you a 10 in his review,is the same person who surprisingly uses the same drumkit as you do in HIS tracks. Maybe I hit a sensitive string when I mentioned the FL Studio.

SO THNKX J00 FOR JOOR GR8TE REVJIEW!!! THNXK TOO J00R ADVISE N STUFF AI CAN REELIE IMPROOF MAI MOOSIC!!

Keep on downrating people for for giving critisism to your work,because it's time well spend rather than listen too their advise and try to improve your music!

[Lil Wayne N TechniQue]

HOT!!!!

best track ever!!!!